Thursday, 28 May 2015

Hinemoa and Tutanekai

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19 comments:

  1. Madie long28 May 2015 at 19:59

    I love it Kyla Stirling, jake and ethan , I like how your voice is nice and clear, I like the way you have presented it ..... And WELL DONE
    By Madie

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  2. Anonymous2 June 2015 at 17:31

    I liked it and how it was presented fast and had a clear loud voice. Thanks alot Kyla, Stirling, Ethan and Jake for your wonderful sharing.
    By Jayden Lee

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  3. Unknown2 June 2015 at 19:38

    I like your story i like that you talked clearly and your presentation
    was great. By Amodh

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  4. Anonymous2 June 2015 at 20:03

    WOW,Jake,Kyla,Ethan and Stirling.
    I like how you put your time and effort into doing this.
    Kyla you have a nice and clear voice while you are talking so everyone can hear you properly.
    Your pictures that you drew were very bright and colourful.
    By Myanna.

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  5. Anonymous3 June 2015 at 16:51

    nice job Jake Kyla Stirling and Ethan
    I like who you made it understandable for the younger children great job.

    BY CONNOR

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  7. Anonymous4 June 2015 at 13:01

    It is cool to see you using a lound voice so that everyone can hear your voice. I also like when you say something bad always happens. I think that you tried your best. Hope you make another one Jake,Kyla,Stirling and Ethan. By Riley.

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  8. Anonymous4 June 2015 at 18:42

    I think that little kids are really going to understand your story because they don't have to read the myth they can listen . And I think it is a very interesting story great job . Emily

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  9. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:29

    Great story it was very well explained
    By EMMA L

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  10. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:30

    Well done it was really good I like the pictures
    BY KALLUM

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  11. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:35

    Thanks everyone I really like how we co-operated it made the job much easier but I think we could work on fixing up mistakes before we publish.
    By Kyla!

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  12. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:36

    Well done I loved your loud voice kyla great job Stirling Kyla Ethan and jake
    By bella

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  13. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:40

    Well done jake kyla Ethan Stirling
    It was easy to understand
    And had good presentation

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  15. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:45

    Well done Jake kyla stirring and Ethan nice work people
    BY JAKE

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  16. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:47

    AMAZING Kyla, Ethan, Stirling & Jake.
    Great job I loved the book. Really well explained it was AWESOME!
    The book was presented to a high standard..
    By Ella

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  17. Anonymous5 June 2015 at 08:54

    Good job Jake,Kyla,Ethan and Striling I loved . By Kelly

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  18. Anonymous12 June 2015 at 08:35

    You did an amazing job by jaimee

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